So I know this is terrible, and a feeble attempt at wit and imagery and deepness and whatnot, but it is my first (and possibly least embarrassing) poem.
I need work, I know, but I wanted to post something. So here it is. Enjoy.
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I sit
and wait.
And I ponder
what is to come.
and what has preceded.
Ah! Finally!
That electric-blue beacon
of knowledge or news!
How eager I am to open and read.
The satisfaction is great.
This is what our lives
have come to
in this age.
Pitiful.
-R.J.-
1 comment:
it's definitely not pitiful! it's a great start!
Be proud!
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